Deep Divisions

I have added another story, Deep Divisions, to the short story tab.  This story is set against the backdrop of the 1984-85 miners strike.  It was a story I submitted as part of my last OU course.  It arose from an exercise we were asked to do by our tutor.  In the exercise we given an opening paragraph to use as an introduction to a story of our own.  I liked the piece I wrote so I decided to build on it.   I have put some reading notes at the end of the story.

What do you think?

Check out the "What do you think?" tab to see the same story written from three different points of view.    Warning:- it's a gloomy story.  Which version do you think works the best and why?  Thanks in advance for taking the time to read and comment!